This is Part 3 of my project to document the poor text translations in Alice in the Heart ~Wonderful Wonder World~
. For more project details and to start from the very beginning, see here
We’re staying in the Hatter Mansion and attempting to date the other eligible bachelors in the Hatter Family Mafia. Unfortunately, the ones that are left have a bit of a creep factor to them. Still, in the interest of documenting each route’s translation…here we go.
The color of the text boxes denotes the person speaking:
- Pink: Alice is talking out loud
- Gold or Green: Alice is thinking to herself
- Blue: Someone else is talking to Alice
Tweedle Dee and Tweedle Dum are the lazy gatekeepers at the Hatter Mansion. Dee is in the blue clothes and is obsessed with relaxing, Dum is in the red clothes and is obsessed with making money. They both fall in love with Alice and attempt to share her as a girlfriend. Alice goes along with it only because the twins threaten to fight each other to the death otherwise (and they’re not joking).
(They call me "Sis" instead of "Alice".)
"He looks at me around my head, and the other looks me in the same way."
"A truly good thing is recognised its goodness by only the look!!!"
(What's the "snip" about?)
"He said it so freshly, really freshly"
(This "whole" is talked about a few times and it's never spelled right.)
(There's nothing too wrong with these sentences, I just thought they were funny.)
"I don't look so well." (Elliot was talking to Alice about her not looking well.)
"Do you have an eye on your back?"
"It's better to get lost and die, rather than to kill animals"
"Then we can literally share but ....., you will probably die, right? Will you die?"
"I have no idea how I can repair their brains."
"they were thinking about me until their heads explode"
"As if human ended up with non-human. It was just a series of a flow."
"Let me feel at ease if I take my eyes off."
"P.h.e.w. ..... . " (Alice didn't initiate or want this kiss.)
"When Blood clapped his hands, there was a machine sound like the clock hands standing straight up the time."
"I wasn't really sure what kind of things the twins did to make a food of him"
"What kind of good time can create a weird sound from another planet?!" (Okay, I put this one in here because it cracked me up.)
That was not an enjoyable route at all, I was too creeped out. Maybe I’ll have a better time with the Mafia’s boss?
Time to date the head of the Hatter Family Mafia. Blood looks exactly like Alice’s ex-boyfriend from the real world, so she already feels a little uneasy around him. Still thinking this is all a dream, she blames her subconscious. Blood is a manipulative creep. I got the “good” ending in this route and it’s the most disturbing thing ever.
(Blood is mistakenly called "Brad" a few times in the script.)
"That's sounds very scarily."
("You have a gut" written like this means "you're fat". Blood should have said "you have guts.")
"There's dim in my head."
"He talks this way like this. I'm scared hell out of him."
"Knock knock. Staying in my room, the door is knocked."
"Then, I peak at Blood working while I read. And now I'm still keep peaking him."
"The part, with respect raised my heat beats."
"How many times I see him. The more I see him, the more."
"..... If I had someone like that, I wouldn't let her go even if I had to loose both of my legs. I would swear to be gauged in my heart if I ever cheated."
"I fall myself. Just like needles do."
"I wish ...., you die a million times."
"Fu .... u." (he's laughing)
"It makes your moth watered right?" (Chrome's enhanced spell check keeps wanting to fix all these errors I'm typing, lol)
"While we are having an endless quarrel, I struggle to pull my arm off."
Alice has the choice of going back to the real world or staying in Wonderland with Blood. On the literal cliff of reality, Blood rushes to her and proposes marriage, refusing to take “no” for an answer.
"If you stay here, I'll ..... . I don't mind taking the most complicated responsibility for men."
"I'm saying I can go to the grave of life with you!"
"If I had to marry you, I'd rather die!"
"If you don't marry me, I'll kill you!!"
Alice is forced to marry the boss of the mafia, a guy she hates. I don’t see how this can possibly be considered the good ending.
(Of course "gloom" should be "groom" here, but I'll let it slide because this is certainly a gloomy situation.)
"A bride who has to become defensive to her gloom. I never had a relief when I'm with him."
"I'm afraid that being with you, it ruins my life."
(..... I want a divorce.)
Well, that’s a bummer ending. Next update we get the heck out of the Hatter Mansion and attempt to date the sanest guy I can find: Julius the Clockmaker.
“Heroin, heroine” is the kind of mistake I’d expect from a native grade schooler, not a foreigner. Unless it’s literal and referring to waking up after a heroin dose.
In Dutch you’d use the word heroïne for heroin, so yeah some foreigners would genuinely make that mistake.
Wonderful wonder world magic fills the air
Wonderful wonder world it’s a winner of you’re there
Wild rides and water slides, roller coasters sing
Being to life the new excitement, all your cars take Queen
In Wonderful wonder world happiness is king
I don’t think there is definite evidence to confirm or deny it, but heroin supposedly did get its name as an advertising ploy to say it makes you feel like a hero. This was before it became the drug of evil it is only known as now.
So much good bad translation here. The best nuggets have already been identified. Although Alice is very calm as she thinks about if she has had any regrets in life. Couldn’t afford another facial expression?
Not so much advertising ploy as the discoverer thought it made him feel heroic.
The drug and the “female hero” definitions use the exact same word in spanish, so that’s another language that could be tripped up by that. Also the name of the drug comes from the word “hero” to begin with. It’s not a weird mistake, but it is rather silly.
This constantly veers between “hilariously awful” and “nigh unreadable,” and I’m not really sure how I’m supposed to process it.
That said, “Jumping Jesus” is a phrase that’d make for some good merchandise material.
“I inspire my fist” could be a pretty good line in certain contexts. This… isn’t one.
It sounds like something a Bard/Monk multiclass in a D&D game would say before punching someone.
What ho, Muscle Wizard! Might you cast us a spell?
Ho Ho Ho Ho! Of course, young adventurer!
I CAST FIST
I had to read it all twice before I figured out that the red text box is Alice speaking out loud, the gold text box is Alice thinking, and the blue text box is another character speaking. That made it a little easier to understand… but then I can’t tell what is supposed to be absurd in an alice-in-wonderland sort of way, and what is absurd because it was translated by a gibbon with a keyboard :S
I’ll be sure to point that out in my next update. Sometimes Alice thinks in a green text box too! D:
Isn’t that just Google Translate or something similar? It reads pretty much exactly like the Japanese wikipedia pages I auto-translate sometimes to gleam bits of info on obscure Japanese stuff.
“Several tens of minutes” almost sounds poetical in a medieval sort of way.
I feel it’s a combination of bad human translator and bad machine translation. I don’t feel a machine would write “tow” instead of “two”, translate”Jumping Jesus” out of “!”, use the word “smooth’s”, etc.
“Jumping Jesus” came from “!”?
So it seems like they looked up something to the effect of “English language exclamations of surprise.” I refuse to believe “jumping Jesus” was at the top of that list.
I wonder if it’s a phrase one of the translators had heard somewhere, like in a movie or something.
The icing on that particular slice of cake is that they ended that line with a period.
You are right! that’s the best.
I have heard the phrase “Jumping Jehoshaphat” a couple of times. It does look like “Jumping Jesus” is a phrase some people use, and it does stand out as “interesting English”. It likely did come from a movie.
It’s weird, but having a bit of knowledge into Japanese speech patterns helps make this more comprehensible. It’s like the translation got partway out the gate before getting stuck and started flailing.
Yeah, I’m really getting a “Japanese speaker with an extremely rudrimentary understanding of English trying to translate word by word/setphrase by setphrase” from this.
“Jumping Jesus” reminds me of Phoenix Drive, an infamous (18+) fangame which seemed like it had a bad machine translation, except that it had Phoenix Wright saying “cool beans” repeatedly.
“Oh snap! I do not hear such a truth?!”
This and Phoenix Drive both seem like the product of a native Japanese speaker with rudimentary fluency in English (in other words, they took English classes in high school a few years ago and did OK I guess) translating dialogue with a J-to-E dictionary and picking out the word or phrase they liked the best.
I will beat my rod til… a tank empties!
Beyond the bad translation, I couldn’t help but notice that Elliot March is HUGE!
O oh o-tome it’s gold mine!
Just so much bad translation to love here. The usual nonsensical poorly phrased English, but also some wacky non sequiturs, like the Mafia and woooorst shit lines.
Are we sure Blood here wasn’t supposed to be “Brad”, or possibly “Vlad”? They’d all be spelled ブラッド in Japanese.
I like where your head’s at.
I was wondering about that too. And the twins’ route is called “Bloody Twins”, but it could also technically be “Bratty Twins”. I’ll see if I can find some Japanese materials that show the names in English.
Puts down his tongue was probably “shitauchi” or making the “tch” sound.
“Julius swings the tool and looks unpleasant (Deeply unpleasant he looks).”
That is some Yoda stuff right there.
“….. If I had someone like that, I wouldn’t let her go even if I had to loose both of my legs. I would swear to be gauged in my heart if I ever cheated.”
“I fall myself. Just like needles do.”
Ok, I’m guessing this is supposed to be a pinky-swear/swallow a thousand needles thing? Also, euurgh, you’re right about that “happy” ending.
Ordinarily I’d say the “(snip)” sounds like an editing note that had been accidentally left in, but that would require this to have been edited.
> (…I want a divorce.)
I uh, can’t say I blame you.
I can’t wait for more of this! My friend and I find the best and worst otome and basically do a highlight reel for each other with the screenshots like this. So when I found this it was like stumbling in to a gold mine.
More is definitely coming! This is really fun, I’m glad you and your friend do this too 😀
Learning new words from bad translations is always fun. (I think Final Fantasy 4 single-handedly rescued “spoony” from complete oblivion.) But it always makes me wonder, how did they FIND that word? What crazy Japanese-to-English dictionary do they have that lists something THAT obscure? I imagine I’d be hard pressed to find a printed-on-paper English dictionary for English speakers that would have that. And if I did, it would probably be at least a foot thick and require both arms to lift!
(I guess it makes a little more sense in the age of the internet, but it still seems like a weird thing to find unless you already have perfectly serviceable English synonyms to use as search terms.)
“(…and what the heck is swollen water?)”
Were they perhaps aiming for something like “flush with cash”? I don’t speak any Japanese, but that’s the best connection I can make from talking about money to talking about “swollen water”.
So, are you in a slump or what? I’ve noticed that the amount of updates have been rather slow these past few months… Kinda hope to read more informative articles here and more often too.
Hey there! We’re ramping up work on a project that we can’t really announce yet. This is going to require a lot of Mato’s time and energy for a while, so updates will be slower. I’ll try to write articles when I can, but of course mine can’t be as informative as Mato’s. He’ll still be writing some informative stuff, just not as often.
I love how they’re using a big word like ‘otorhinolaryngology’ and still using it wrong. Here it should clearly be ‘otorhinolaryngologist’.
I don’t know. There was an officially translated manga version of this game once, and his name was still written as “Blood” there.
Man, what’s up with all the creepy guys on offer?
“I flowened my face”?
Maybe she frowned her face?
“I didn’t have to be ill-manneredly and put my nose in him” is great, and then it’s followed by “and be corporative”
“I feel the crisis of my life as reality.”
Same, Alice. Same.
“I tried to complain but he cut me up.”
I imagine that the tricking on me line is referring to the tricking sport which combines breakdancing and gymnastics, so that guy is really just doing flips and dancing as a form of establishing dominance.
lmao, you’re a gem <3
Wired can be slang for amped or strung out (as in, on drugs). It would certainly fit the Wonderland theme!
What a wild ride this has been. And yes, the Queen really does seem like the best option. Who’d have thought?
I often see the “(read monotone)” phrase used in written Japanese in a similar sense to the English “she said sarcastically!” — i.e., drawing attention to the fact that one’s words are insincere. It’s probably not a real cue that got left in. On the other hand, a competent translator would have made that clear to start with, of course…
It took me until this final update to realize that the color-coding at the start of the articles refers to the background of the dialog boxes, not the color of the text itself. I was thinking there were supposed to be subtle off-white tints that I kept overlooking because I was concentrating on the translations.
Hilarious translations aside, I have to ask why the non-dateable NPCs have no eyes. I mean, why?
I played this a bit when it was out on Android, wow I really did forget how bad these translations are
If the game is no longer available (and no other games will ever be translated, rip), how did you have access to it?
A fan hooked us up with a copy.